Talk:TTMIK tingkat 1 pelajaran ke-20

The article need to be more understandable

The translation is good, but has "too literally" style. It should be more understandable. I tried to slightly change the words usage without changed the meaning, fix some typos and untranslated sentences. --KIDE777 (talk) 22:31, 28 August 2012 (PDT)