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The article need to be more understandable
The translation is good, but has "too literally" style.
It should be more understandable. I tried to slightly change the words usage without changed the meaning, fix some typos and untranslated sentences.
--KIDE777 (talk) 22:31, 28 August 2012 (PDT)